Bit By Awful Bit

This is the latest snippet from a book I've been working on. I've been putting this together for almost a year now, I've only made it 8 chapters in so far. I like to post my progress because I want 'reader' feedback, my biggest concern with writing about life in the military is the broad variety of acronyms and terms that everyday people aren't so familiar with: I want to simplify and explain this as best I can without dumbing shit down so badly that I wind up insulting my 'audience'

"Watch" a reading of it HERE.

For some reason, adding the video as a link is the only way I can get this to work right now (not sure why, I've done it many times int he past with no issues.)

Enjoy ^_^